This is my final version of fanfic based on the anime ‘Hunter X hunter’.
Going home
When Lizzy woke up this morning, she was confused by the surroundings, which she was feel like in a completely different world: a clown with fancy, colorful dress and ridiculous costume, a corpulent short man taking two cans of juice in his hands, and the buzz of voices in the crowded room. Suddenly there is a booklet hit her head and she opened the first page of it: [Note 1: the proof of the existence of overmatch in this world will be the ‘hunter' qualifying examination to obtain a certificate]
[Note 2: Hunter license is one of the most useful objects in this world].
"Excuse me..." suddenly she heard a boy's voice far away. The voice sounded childish and Lizzy assume that he was the same age as her at most. However, Lizzy walked to the source of the voice to check, but stopped as soon as she noticed someone’s presence - the fatty guy. To think that he has a cruel smile on his face and offer a can of laxative juice to a thirsty people like her. However, the target was the two boys over there.
“Hi, guys. You must feel tired after walking such long distance to come here, My name is Tongba and I have participated 35 times hunter exams, here are fruit juice for you to quench… "Tongba says to the two boys that one has silver hair and the other looks shorter.
With apologetic smile on the taller boy’s face, he says: "Uncle, before leaving our brother has already superimposed enough food for us, so, thanks for your kindness.” Tongpa aware that his tricks decisively found by the two boys so he left in a huff.
In a minute Lizzy realized that she just had a Chromo Cross, which brings her into the world of ‘Hunter X Hunter’. She was excited to see Kilura (the silver hair boy) and Gon( the main character).
“Hey, my name is Lizzy and I am glad to have this examination with you.”
“Nice to meet you, we are Gon and Kilura. Let’s try our best!” replied Gon.
After six hours of completing the marathon race (the first section of exam), most of the candidates are breathing heavily, thinking they finally got out of this excruciating trial. Lizzy sat up from the ground and still cannot believe she is a qualified member in this competition. She looked back at the door called ‘the end of fall, really feel for the fail players in their suffering.
The examiner Ribe is in charge of the second section of the whole exam. “The rule is simple for you guys, each candidate has a record of the test which is a round card on your own, the number you need to gather is determined by drawing lots. The purpose is to capture the target number and the basic requirements of the trial is set to gathering at least six points, your own number card is worth three points and the enemy worth another three.” Ribe explained in good mood.
“That is to say, apart from the target you are also allowed to get six points from others. The destination is Fire Island for a limited period of just one week.” Ribe announced.
"Although I have no idea about your target, Lizzy, you don’t need to be so worried…”. After exchanging the note with their target number, Lizzy, Kilura and Gon luckily found that they are obviously not opponents in this context. However, next minute Lizzy was entirely shocked by the truth, "Because your target never even hides his own card ...” Lizzy followed the direction in which his finger pointed and she found the No.44 card in the chest of the crazy clown cecil, which is one of the most powerful players in the examination.
Three days have passed;
Lizzy is still following cecil in order to catch his card… She was extremely fatigues, but in support of a spirtual power, her efforts to maintain a cool mind and curled up hiding in relying on the inside of the rock crevice. In this circumstance, she did not dare to let her own sense of the trace of the slack.Enduring the harassment of the mosquito, Liz was suffocated with fear and could not breathe, soon what happened prove her caution was definitely an useful effort. She heard the scrape of footsteps from the chimney and immediately judge the person who walk down is not ordinary, the kind of tentative steps are easy to be ignored and misunderstood aspast as the sound of small animals or leaves. Then Liz broke out in a cold sweat, held her breath, and was scared by the strong smell of blood fluttering in the air.
“It’s cecil!” she thought. “How can I catch his card without fighting with him?” Lizzy cried and never feels such helpless before. At this moment, she saw a fishing rod was fluttering and the card on cecil’s chest was missing! Cecil flings a flurry of knives at enemy around him and seriously injured Gon’s body.
“Gon!” Lizzy shouted. “Why do you help me secreatly?”
Lizzy was running towards Gon and crying her eyes out while she saw Gon’s body.
“I have thought about Cecil’s weakness for several days and I keep practicing the skills to concentrate on tracking Cecil …I was waiting for the best timing to help you. Lizzy, we are originally from the same world. One year ago I also had a cross…this is a wonderful world fulfill of friendship and kindness. However, there is a voice keep reminding me to come back home, one year may equal to ten years in reality…I know you are the one to help me escape from here.” Gon murmured weakly.
“I will…no, we are all going back home through our own strength one day. Please wake up, Gon.” Lizzy cried.
The story has an open ending…
Hey Doris, Nice fanfic! I see you have made a lot of changes as well as checked the spelling. There are still a few spelling errors as well as in some places you have used words incorrectly, but other than that I really like your fanfic :) I like how it has an open ending too, hinting a sequel maybe?
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