Breakups,Romance and Revelations.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7839329/1/Breakups_Romance_and_Revelations
This fanfic is about lives of a group of teenagers in Summer bay.
The author didnt write a lot of details of why breakups happens,and also what are and how well the relationships with this group of people.
truth hurts http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6130542/1/truth_hurts
This story is about Kay and Ryan was bestfriend.Kay fell in love with her bestfriend Ryan,after well stuff happened,they no longer bestfriends.Kay was really hurt from that..After three years,everything its changed.they met agin.Ryan want to get Kay back again,but Kay refused him.
The author didnt really write about what happens between Kay and Ryan.Also i cant feel how and what Kay been through,because the author didnt write the emotional of her.If the author can add more action with Kay and Ryan will be better.
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